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Post by Torigoma on Thu Apr 09, 2009 2:55 am

........Here is the Scenario, It is 500 years into the future, and Man has nearly mastered the use of Genetic Engineering in Animals, and has made thousands of new creature to be used of a wide variety of reasons, Sport, food, fighting, and as Appliances, The next Step was in Humans, desperate to accomplish this in their lifetime, a group of Scientists Discovered Something unheard of before, the genetic code of God, imbedded in every living thing in existence, when brought to the surface, this code would cause great change in anything it touched, If they could Control it, they could make ANYTHING they could think of, But God's power is not something that can Be controlled.

........In the First experiment, the God gene was introduced to lab rat, at first it was stable, it was vibrant, healthy, and showed power that astonished them all. The Rat seemed to double in Size every day, and seemed to get Smarter is well. In a Week, It was the size of a Large Dog and had the Intelligence closer to a Humans than even a Chimpanzee, but something was wrong, It Seemed to get More violent and unstable as the days past, until one day it killed and ate his handler. Unrestrained, the goDRat* (Genetically Operated Deity) as it had been come to been know as, went on a Rampage, Killing any living thing it could find, It took nothing less than a Full out Military Air Strike on the City to Finally Stop it, but even this did not Kill it. It’s body Continued to regenerate, so the Government Froze it, Stuck it is a 10 foot Steel Block, and dumped it into the lowest part the ocean.

........It was though that the Great power that was not natral to it, drove the beast insane. After this the God Gene Project was scrapped in the eyes of the Public, but under the table, a rouge group who had stole part of the goDRat had started their own experiments. Unlike the first attempt, in which a foreign gene was introduced, this new group decided to plant the gene BEFORE fertilization, so the gene would be natural to the test subject, after many tries, the group succeeded in making a stable, natural goD. These subjects were stable, Controllable, and Lived up to Five times longer that others, the next step was to Test it on Humans, but This would be Humanities Greatest mistake. Where the Animal subjects were stable, the Human Subjects were very Different. Most Became Mindless beasts, anything they touched withered and died, and time seemed to flux around them, things would revert to previous forms or turn to dust in their presence. The Few that were able to keep their minds were even worse, They were Children with the power of God.

........Without the Truly Divine Mind, their Fragile Human minds were warped by their power, they started to find pleasure in hurting living things, and the Staff started to call them Demons. Thus they were giving the code name D.A.E.M.O.N**, they did not know how ture this was. As the Daemons grew in their power, they became more and more violent, and Started to show control over the lesser subjects that were named the Sentinel, do to their habit to stand absolutely still unless there was something near. When the Oldest of the Daemons reached the age of 15, he lead a revolt against the Humans that had made him, and with the help of the other Daemons and the Sentinels, they Broke out, and obliterated those that stood against them. The Daemons, with their god like power, Destroyed cities by the dozens, and the near immortal Sentinels, ravaged every army in the world, It seemed that humanity was seeing its last days, but a new hope was rising, and Man would be given a Power to rival the Daemons.......from God himself.

……..The Daemons Spared very few, and those that they did, were Captured and sent to Work in Sentinel Breeding and Construction Camps. The Small Patches of resistance had Developed Weapons that had some, bet extremely limited effect on the beasts. They had found that if small amounts of Sentinel DNA were added to Human blood and then placed in a Bullet, It could pierce the Time space that surrounded the Sentinels, But these were extremely Unstable, and tended to fail at the most critical time. Adding in the sheer number of Bullets it took to kill even a Single Sentinel, the weapons were unreliable at best.

……..Then Something Happened. During a Raid by the Sentinel on one of the last remaining Resistant Camps, a Group of Seven appeared. With their strange weapons, they Wipes out over Three Hundred Sentinels in a Matter of Minutes. They called Themselves The ArchA.N.G.E.Ls***, and they would bring back hope to a dying world. After the Battle, These Warriors Told their Story to the group, How they had been visited by Four Beings who Called themselves the Seraphim****, and Gave them their Power, Power to Protect this world from the Beasts they had made, Now this Power was free to take by anyone that wished to do so, and With it They would finally turn the tide of the War. They had Won a battle, but the War was only beginning.

MANY MONTHS LATER
After many Months of Training, you have Been Chosen to Become an A.N.G.E.L, And Have been Giving a Black Sphere. You Were told that this Would be your Weapon. Confused, you Look up at your Commander, Only to Realize that you are no longer in the base. Instead, you Stand on a Floor made of Completely Clear Crystal, and a Blinding Light Surrounds the entire area. In the middle of the Light Sits a Huge Throne, and on the Throne Sits an even Brighter Light, Around the Throne Stand Four Creatures. Then, In amazement you realize that you stand before God and the Seraphim. Several Minutes of Silence pass, Then a Booming Voice says “You Who have been Chosen to Defend The World, Stand now in the Center of Creation. Here, Your Will shapes Reality. The Sphere you now hold is Pure Creation, you're to Shape it as you see Fit, But be warned, It’s Power will Reflect your Own, as Will it’s Nature reflect your Nature”. Looking down, you Find that the Black Sphere Had Transformed and now Burned with a White light similar to that on the Throne. Then Suddenly, there is a Flash of Light and Everything Disappears and you find yourself floating in a White nothingness. There is a Tap on your Shoulder and a Man is White Hands you a Sheet of Paper and says, “Here is you Submisson Form, Write Down your Information and We’ll get you set up, Use this area to make your Weapon, Oh! and Good Luck”

SUBMISSION FOURM UP AND RUNNING!!!
*Yes it is goD, not god, or God, but goD which is an abbreviation.
**Any Ideas what this could mean?
***I Know the Archangels Aren’t the Highest level Angel, (really Third lowest following the Principalities and Angels), But were gona make them Kage Level Here, and I'll reorganize the others
****The Seraphim are the Four beasts that Surround the Throne of God, They are Like Guardians and with Be Whom the A.N.G.E.Ls get their Orders from
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Re: The Making of Zion

Post by AiKirikaX on Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:21 am

you sure realise that there is no need for this in this forum as there wont be many ppl in here? -.-
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Post by Torigoma on Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:25 am

>_< no, but there are a few people, might as well try it
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Post by AiKirikaX on Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:28 am

thats the point...
few as in

you max, ryuku, quen, kashi and haruki..... and me...
but dont really count me in as iwont be rping here
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Post by Torigoma on Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:32 am

from what I've Quen and Haruki do, Max could too, RP only need two people (not sure about Ryuku, Mabye). ^_^ yaaaaaa
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Re: The Making of Zion

Post by Quenya on Thu Apr 09, 2009 3:50 pm

Am I supposed to read all of that? O.O
omg... cant you make a summary of it for me? xD hihi jk

and perhaps.. maybe I will RP... depends on it =,=
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Post by AiKirikaX on Thu Apr 09, 2009 4:47 pm

lmao
*high 5's quen*
thats the spirit!!! XD
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Re: The Making of Zion

Post by Quenya on Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:03 pm

O.O *is being high 5d*

whowherewhat did i do? xD
because of the reading part or the maybe part? -.-
You know I'm lazy as hell Kiri hihi xD
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Post by AiKirikaX on Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:19 pm

Quenya wrote:O.O *is being high 5d*

whowherewhat did i do? xD
because of the reading part or the maybe part? -.-
You know I'm lazy as hell Kiri hihi xD
quen is my lil sister XD
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Post by Quenya on Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:21 pm

O.O ow wauw xD
and i never knew hihi =P
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Post by AiKirikaX on Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:36 pm

Torigoma wrote:
whowherewhat did i do? xD
because of the reading part or the maybe part? -.-
You know I'm lazy as hell Kiri hihi xD

>_< Kiri did the same thing!!!

thats what im talking about XD
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Post by Quenya on Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:38 am

daah xD
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Post by Torigoma on Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:41 am

>_< read it and I'll give you a Hug!!
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Post by Quenya on Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:46 am

O.o....

erhmmm... jeez im too tired to read it now xD
Ill do it tomorrow kay? ^^

sunny You've been Hugged by Torigoma sunny
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Post by Torigoma on Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:53 am

lol ^_^ NP
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Post by Quenya on Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:04 pm

You just made me laugh really hard coz of the "you got hugged" thing xD whahaha

* I actually read it O.o omg, xD
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Post by Haruki08 on Fri Apr 10, 2009 8:12 pm

O.O wow that's A LOT of info XD lol sorry but I think ima sit out on this one >.<
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Post by AiKirikaX on Fri Apr 10, 2009 8:42 pm

high 5's haruki too*
XD
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Post by Torigoma on Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:22 pm

>_< just think of it as a Short Story!
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Post by Haruki08 on Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:40 pm

XD *high fives kiri back* lol
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Post by AiKirikaX on Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:52 pm

ewwwwww short stories...
never liked them >.>
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Post by Quenya on Sun Apr 12, 2009 4:11 pm

I'll give you a cookie if you read it? =P
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Post by AiKirikaX on Sun Apr 12, 2009 5:22 pm

naaaah... if someone ever should give out cookies...
then its tori... 100 cookies for each of us quen XD
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Post by Quenya on Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:11 pm

indeed xD
though i already ghaves a cookie ^^
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